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Left for Moscow

Written for Friday Fast Fiction. 100 word photo prompt. Copyright Rochelle Wisoff-fields.

 

Anna.

You have betrayed me. Deserted me for a new love in Moscow. After so many wonderful years together you left without a word of farewell, leaving me nothing but a broken heart and a closet, filled with memories of our years together. You can’t imagine what my friends are saying and not only my friends. My mother says you have been beastly to me. I really do not think I can go on living without you to take care and comfort me? You know how much I’ve needed you.

Bryan

PS: Is there a battery for the clock?

 

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33 comments on “Left for Moscow

  1. avivakohen
    November 23, 2017

    Dedicated to Anna Pavlova?:P

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Bridgesburning Chris
    November 23, 2017

    I love it! In the midst of total desolation but one question.

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  3. yarnspinnerr
    November 23, 2017

    Love the PS. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Iain Kelly
    November 23, 2017

    Heehee, I enjoyed this. I hope she comes back to him.

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  5. neilmacdon
    November 23, 2017

    Geat last line

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    • bbryanthomas
      November 24, 2017

      Thank you

      Like

  6. Susan A Eames
    November 23, 2017

    And there I was feeling sorry for him – until the last line!

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

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  7. Sandra
    November 24, 2017

    I just loved the tone of this letter – it said so much about the writer. The timing was superb.

    Liked by 1 person

    • bbryanthomas
      November 24, 2017

      Thank you Sandra

      Like

  8. Kelvin M. Knight's blog
    November 24, 2017

    The voice here reeks of me me me. I love it. And that P.S is just sublime. I can see the negative effect it would have on the recipient, if she did not throw it way or burnt it first.

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  9. bbryanthomas
    November 24, 2017

    That’s us men. I I I (Kidding)

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  10. Elizabeth Young
    November 24, 2017

    I think he’ll recover quickly, especially now he’s written the hurt out of his system.

    Liked by 1 person

    • bbryanthomas
      November 24, 2017

      It certainly didn’t take long

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  11. Keith's Ramblings
    November 24, 2017

    Tick tock! Nice one.

    Click to read my FriFic!

    Liked by 1 person

  12. Dale
    November 25, 2017

    Och!

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Varad
    November 25, 2017

    No wonder she left him 😀 Nicely done, Bryan.

    Liked by 1 person

  14. athling2001
    November 25, 2017

    Love the last line!

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    • bbryanthomas
      November 25, 2017

      Thank you muchly

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  15. granonine
    November 25, 2017

    Now, the really important thing–a battery for the clock 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  16. Lynn Love
    November 25, 2017

    Well, we all bring different things to a relationship – and Anna is clearly the practical one! Perhaps Moscow will lose its charms once the winter hits? Nicely told Bryan

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    • bbryanthomas
      November 25, 2017

      Thank you Lynn. Don’t know if I come back for that jerk though.

      Liked by 1 person

      • Lynn Love
        November 26, 2017

        Ha! You could be right there 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

      • bbryanthomas
        November 26, 2017

        He, the jerk is certainly not me. But I’m curious as to what in Rochelle’s prompt created him.

        Liked by 1 person

      • Lynn Love
        November 26, 2017

        Some deep searching needed there Bryan 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

      • bbryanthomas
        November 26, 2017

        HaHa. I like to think of myself as being the opposite. You’re right Lynn, I’d better start delving. What are the opening times at your practice?

        Liked by 1 person

      • Lynn Love
        November 27, 2017

        Haha! I’ll email you a full list. My charges are very reasonable.

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  17. k rawson
    November 28, 2017

    At the very end I am getting a sense of why Anna may have left! Nicely take on the prompt.

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  18. Dahlia
    November 28, 2017

    Aha! Very well done indeed 😀

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    • bbryanthomas
      November 28, 2017

      Thank you Dahlia

      Like

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